Stern Critic

[bill morton]

WANTED – STERN CRITICS

I have written various sets of notes on bowls. I would like to have contact with anyone interested in improving the notes. I want a critic to say (a) you have not written that sentence (or paragraph) clearly, (b) your logic in these paragraphs does not rate as correct, (c) you could improve a Reader’s understanding if you changed the order of the material from “x” to “y”. Anyone interested could choose whichever set of notes interested them.

[bill morton]

I thought the 163 Readers of my post may find it interesting that one person has volunteered to help me. However further volunteers most welcomed.

[bill morton]

Hooray - I have just received an offer from a second volunteer. Still plenty of room for good looking and intelligent stern critics to volunteer.

[The Yank]

Myself and others have attempted to give you feedback on a thread you started and you were less than receptive.

Sounds like fun

[bill morton]

Please accept my apologies. If you direct me to the thread to which you refer I shall give you some feedback.

Originally Posted by The Yank

Myself and others have attempted to give you feedback on a thread you started and you were less than receptive.

Sounds like fun